Thursday, January 17, 2008

Moby


Moby Dick is full of the most interesting writing. Melville really had a way with descriptive phrasing. And that guy could write a long sentence too, rambling and wonderful, all held together with semi-colons. That kind of writing has left the world, unfortunately. Modern people just don't have energy to read too many words in a row without a period to rest on. Here's an example, one glorious, busy, extravagant sentence, and not even close to being the longest in the book:

"Though amid all the smoking horror and diabolism of a sea-fight, sharks will be seen longingly gazing up to the ship's decks, like hungry dogs round a table where red meat is being carved, ready to bolt down every killed man that is tossed to them; and though, while the valiant butchers over the deck-table are thus cannibally carving each other's live meat with carving-knives all gilded and tasselled, the sharks, also, with their jewel-hilted mouths, are quarrelsomely carving away under the table at the dead meat; and though, were you to turn the whole affair upside down, it would still be pretty much the same thing, that is to say, a shocking sharkish business enough for all parties; and though sharks also are the invariable outriders of all slave ships crossing the Atlantic, systematically trotting alongside, to be handy in case a parcel is to be carried anywhere, or a dead slave to be decently buried; and though one or two other like instances might be set down, touching the set terms, places, and occasions, when sharks do most socially congregate, and most hilariously feast; yet is there no conceivable time or occasion when you will find them in such countless numbers, and in gayer or more jovial spirits, than around a dead sperm whale, moored by night to a whaleship at sea."

Tired?

1 comment:

wildmary said...

You're right. I enjoy the occasional pause of the period at the end of a sentence.